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How Much Does It Take

Posted by Susan47 on March 30, 2005, at 13:46:18

to kill the love I feel,
what I felt
when I thought
I meant something to somebody,
Someone beautiful to me
And wonderful, wonderfully kind,
and full of loving feelings,
sometimes sexual,
oh yes, in my mind,
my beautiful mind.

You wonderful old soul, how I love you... both of us. You, and I, I loved us together. What lovely thoughts, and feelings, sensations and desires I never really understood the existence of, before.
Does that make any sense?
Do you see me, still?
In your mind's eye, do you ever see
the beautiful version of me?
The one I think you've never
ever really seen.
Because maybe, just maybe,
she might not exist.
She might be only
in my beautiful mind.


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