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Oh So F*cked Up

Posted by susan47 on July 31, 2006, at 23:28:29

Yes, yes, oh yes.
No you see, you did not see.
You saw nothing.
Nada.
Equipment failure.
Working to restore ...
Hah.
Restore.
Restore what?
What is there, to restore?
What was there ever,
what kind of a f*cked-up
human being, an ape without the hair
Oh yes,
Equipment trouble.
Equipment failure.
Trouble. Failure.
Trouble Failure
troublefailure

The train,
it's rushing past at a hundred miles an hour,
a hundred thousand f*cking miles an hour
and I cannot stop it,
I cannot stop
because God damn it
there is equipment failure
in the caboose,
the caboose is coming loose,
we have a loose caboose ladies and gentlemen,
a loose
caboose.

Whew.
What a mouthful.
What a retching numbing mouthful of nothing.
Nada.
Nothing.
I have nothing for you, here.
There is nothing left
there is nothing
Nothing
Nothing
I am nothing.
I always was nothing.
Soon there will be
nothing left
but the sound of my
daughter's voice, God she has a beautiful voice ...
saying Good-night,
I love you Mommy.

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