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Oh, wow.

Posted by susan47 on January 28, 2008, at 19:31:49

In reply to Mirroring, posted by susan47 on December 28, 2007, at 19:01:06

I saw her today,
I saw you both, but you first of all
and then i turned around and walked away and when i came back he was gone ...
and i saw them walking away, together, male and female,
and she had these awesome Stripes in her hair, the underlayer dark, like a she-devil, the top light and lighthearted, blonde in the most wantonly gorgeous feminine sense,
and i felt so carried away by what i saw, there.
In the broadness of his back, of his being, his grey-corduroyed legs, the soft sheen on the fabric carrying him away in mink-like Glory...
Cw. cw cow ... cow, eyes brown and soft and gorgeous like a cow's, only he wasn't that.
Cowered, perhaps, in the end.
But soft and hard, like a bull, like the stallion he was .. is. Is.
Ouch.
Sh*t.
mwah.
F*ck. You.
Not in the threatening sense, but only in my mind.
There was sensuality not displayed today, never shown again to anyone. To Anyone.
Goodbye, good luck, good love.
Ciao.
Take care, eva.


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