Posted by Toph on December 10, 2004, at 12:40:50
In reply to Re: Love Remodeled » Toph, posted by Atticus on December 9, 2004, at 23:28:12
Coming from you Atticus, I'm flattered. I was afraid that you would find it corney. The symbol of the ring was contrived, but the metaphor of the paint is inspired by a real unfortunate change in our relationship. What really pisses me off is I was too anxious to post it and there are so many refinements I could have made, typos and such that I should have changed. Your work always seems so polished. I remember reading before that you were/are a journalist. Do you do any editing? You may hate anyone even touching a word of your poetry (God knows how you hate Bob's asterisks), I would love to see how you would have tweaked or even slashed this story. Would you mind Babblemailing me with your suggestions. I understand if you're not interested. Anyway, thanks. Toph
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