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Re: Love Remodeled » Toph

Posted by Atticus on December 9, 2004, at 23:28:12

In reply to Love Remodeled, posted by Toph on December 8, 2004, at 14:47:04

Hi Toph,
This piece is powerful, compact, and poignant. And God is in the details, as they say. The once-treasured and now paint-stained ring, the changed sense of space in the area where the two of you are painting. It also focuses on two brief moments separated in time. I always feel that the simpler the event you use as a metaphor for a larger message, the more richly textured and effective the piece. There is always the extraordinary revealed in the seemingly ordinary, and you demonstrate that wonderfully here. Atticus


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