Posted by alesta on October 3, 2004, at 9:13:44
In reply to Re: Godsend (My first poem) » alesta, posted by zeugma on October 2, 2004, at 18:32:10
hi, zeugma,
i'm shocked! alas! some feedback! zeugma, i knew i could count on you! :) i wasn't going to write another one, but since i got a response, maybe i will do another. (writing for the sake of writing doesn't inspire me, or probably, anyone. i need someone to actually read it.)
you know, i don't know why i based this poem around romance. i'm really not much of a romantic lately, in the sense that i wrote about..i think the right words can be more seductive than the stereotypical idea of romance. i guess i thought it might draw the reader in. i think the end of my poem, which centers away from this, is better. maybe i'll focus on the theme of the emotional realm or relationships sans romance next time..more interesting, less cheesy.
take care zeug!
aimee :)
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