Posted by zeugma on October 2, 2004, at 18:32:10
In reply to Godsend (My first poem), posted by alesta on October 1, 2004, at 19:31:39
amy,
if only the moments of iridescence could last. Sometimes it seems to make the desolation worse when there is something to contrast it with. Sometimes I think I see a peculiar beauty in desolation. But the moments that make the world more than two-dimensional- those are too rare. Will you share your second poem with us, too?
-z
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