Posted by Atticus on August 29, 2004, at 8:38:15
In reply to Re: poem...Contradiction, posted by malthus on August 29, 2004, at 0:19:28
Hi Serious Puppy,
This poem just blows me away. Your use of language, your use of imagery, is just gorgeous, just delicious to the ear. It's just packed with little gems like "watery fire," one following so fast on the heels of another that it's honestly breathtaking. It's not just ear candy, though; it contains your usual complement of keen observations about just how complex love really is. Your writing -- to me -- seems to just have taken a quantum leap over the last couple of poems. I'm really quite charmed. Don't you dare stop writing now! Don't even think about. The guitar may be silent, but your internal music is coming through more and more clearly and captivatingly. :) Atticus, who wishes he had written this
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