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Words mis-begotten, but gotten nonetheless

Posted by susan47 on September 27, 2008, at 19:39:58

In reply to Dr. CW, Dr. C, cw, c see you know who you are, posted by susan47 on September 27, 2008, at 19:35:57

thank you to Sarah
I miss everything about you.
Doesn't mean much,
Doesn't mean anything at all
The life I've left behind me is ... what?
What is that, you say?
I had a life?
There was life, before Man, man so tender and sweet,
so sweet I loved you so much.
Good-bye goodbye goodbye oh God.
Will I survive, does it matter, does it?
Who cares, if not I?
God, I loved you so much I prayed that love could be
transferred
to the right person,
to the right conditions succumbing,
I prayed there was a space like that,
somewhere,
for me.
And the shock I live in now,
is that there is none.
There is no hiding from Truth.
I loved you so much.
God forgive me.


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