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Re: That was a nasty thing

Posted by Susan47 on March 18, 2007, at 18:08:51

In reply to That was a nasty thing, posted by Susan47 on March 11, 2007, at 22:46:25

Hello, how are you?
As if I didn't know.
I mean, really.

Really, now.
Do you think I wouldn't know?
Understand the necessity of what you're doing?
It's a bit crass, really.
What you're doing.
What you're-all doing.

Out there. In your own place.
The place where you get to be the Competent One.
The one who defends himself
against the alien Me.
Ah.
What the hell.
Who do you think you're kidding?
Everyone.
Everyone except me and a few others
Ones who see another side of things.
Something about trust.
Something about .. something you
couldn't handle.
Didn't know how.
Tried.
Just didn't know what the hell to do.
What the fr*gging hell would anyone do?


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