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elephants, moths and bears oh my!

Posted by zenhussy on March 1, 2007, at 11:34:22

In reply to just stop...stop trying....stop doing...JUST STOP!, posted by zenhussy on January 17, 2007, at 11:00:49

elephants, butterflies and bears oh my stars!
spiders too for weaving these webs that all animals twist and spin into their lives.

careful of the venom inside the spider.
careful of the poison powder on the wings of the butterfly.
careful of the bear...well it is a bear after all...one of few predators of man.
careful of the elephant as she thinks she remembers all when she only remembers parts.

in a boat, in a car, not here, nor there, not very far.
on a train, in a plane, do not like them for they're insane!
not now, not then, not ever indeed
please stop this madness that is your life's greed.

online can be like carving in stone....hard to explain the words later...or like a tattoo one regrets getting. remember that next time your chisel is out and you're wooing your newest batch of larvae.

renenber that fella in his twenties who would hang around with high schoolers? the girls all thought he was hot sheet and the dudes thought he was tough. turns out he was only an insecure person who was afraid to relate to ppl his own age so he sought a younger, less discerning, more accepting audience. high schoolers put up with his antics...while his peers would have let him know it was time to grow up and move on. of course he chose to remain w/ the kids! why grow and challenge oneself when one can coast?

audience turnover can help keep one stuck...or stable...depending on perspective.

 

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