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me, jane; you tarpaper » Joan797

Posted by jpj on July 22, 2006, at 22:41:34

In reply to Re: me, joan susan » jpj, posted by Joan797 on July 22, 2006, at 9:36:25

> I never was good with the dismount thing.

uh-huh...you saying you couldn't get off????


> Are you Janie? And if so, where the heck have you been? Having a life a suppose..........

there once was a woman named jane
who, to everyone else, was a pain
she learned not to feel
she learned how to deal
now naked she plays in the rain


you ponder my identity
i ponder my existence
you wonder where i've been
i wonder if i've been
you speculate life
i contemplate death


my family has grown
but i'm living "alone";
a dozen dogs, four horses,
a log house - ten courses,
chainsaw and weedwhacker --
such a wicked whipcracker.
a man in my life
source of joy, source of strife.
gunther, a kitten, a gift from my son
lives in my bathroom. i carry a gun.
this poetry stinks,
but it tells you my story;
only that, i would say,
is its redeeming glory.

boy, i suck just as much at this at night as i do in the day.
i've read around a little, seems you're making your way.

(runs into the bathroom, looks as the license taped to her mirror, looks at her reflection)

i think i might be janie, joanie
but then again, i may be just plain jane.

(big toothy grin)
hi, e'reybutty


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