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Re: Fumes » ClearSkies

Posted by Susan47 on January 13, 2006, at 1:42:57

In reply to Fumes, posted by ClearSkies on January 12, 2006, at 10:05:16

> The cat sits by me
> On the arm of the sofa
> Looks expectantly at me
> Hoping maybe for some salmon
> A shrimp
> A scallop
>
> I purse my lips and
> Blow a kiss at her
>
> She sniffs the air
> Expecting promises of
> Snacks to come
>
> Instead
>
> Whiskers flatten
> Skinny cat lips curl
> Eyes blink in unpleasant surprise
>
> Wino breath again
>
> Ewwww.

I agree w. Damos, witty Dorothy Parker-style, I love this I hope you're not offended.


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