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Re: Try I statements, AG » sunny10

Posted by cockeyed on September 16, 2005, at 21:04:55

In reply to Re: Try I statements, AG, posted by sunny10 on September 14, 2005, at 9:08:49

Hi, Ada, I dread your posts. I read 'em anyway and they wake up to many ghosts. And i wish there were something better than this that I might say. Okay, so, speaking metaphoricaly or some other schtick...give him a whack with a big ugly stick. I know this is not civil, know it's wrong, but your posts leave me visceral. And I know that my kind of b.s. is totally wrong.
So, in the spirit of god-knows-what civility
provide a description. A portrait of what seems to be your nightmare. A description, an accurate depictition of all the disgraces put into one slug of hate or whatever. You seemed
trapped in snares of your own device. Yeah, right, rhymes real nice. But you seem to suffer,
and suffer...on and on. Is there any way you can make it gone, or get yourself out...
Please excuse my clumsiness because I'm the last clown to give advice out. I can't stop drinking, gonna probably kill myself, but then again maybe not. So enuff of my b.s., gonna take another hit. Hey, I'm tapering off, not gonna finish it. Cockeyed.


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