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Re: i want it back

Posted by cockeyed on July 20, 2005, at 1:54:19

In reply to i want it back, posted by B2chica on July 18, 2005, at 12:37:16

hi, I have a nerve saying this but you don't know from "evil" Is being sexual cruel, is living life a thing of the devil? Why look back, it's just been and gone. And why be so "evil" on your self. It hurt to read your poem 'cause in many ways I'm back...I'm 4 and I can still feel the hate. There's a world out there, maybe it's not great. But don't hurt yourself, anymore than they hurt you. I know I sound like a fool but that's what they do. "For your own good...what will the nabors think?" Lord, here I go...But learn to value that kid of 4, hey, it's still you. Maybe you'll have to work at getting it back, but not looking backwards. I'll be honest things were all sweetness and light when I was four, but I lived in hell. Nothing to go backwards for. Cockeyed.


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