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Re: Whisper in the Ballet of Leaves

Posted by sleepygirl on June 30, 2005, at 17:52:33

In reply to Whisper in the Ballet of Leaves, posted by Atticus on June 28, 2005, at 14:46:08

It makes more sense to me now that I know it was about loss. I guess I figured it was somehow about loss, but it sounded like you really missed her when you said you thought you heard her voice. You can almost feel it from the poem. Saffron in cold winter, how lonely somehow, such a reminder.


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