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Re: Whisper in the Ballet of Leaves

Posted by cockeyed on June 30, 2005, at 0:16:41

In reply to Whisper in the Ballet of Leaves, posted by Atticus on June 28, 2005, at 14:46:08

Atticus, I thought I hated you but this is absolutely delicious...Just plain bathetic crapalicious. You give me hope. Hey, while you're at it why don't you "smite the sensate cosmos with your love." Read your poem thru
"crystal teardrops" I'm obviously envious and delight at having a true opportunity to get on you. Oh, the pathos, oh, the woe! Please give me a break, today was rotten enuff. Please write some more of your good stuff. As nasty as I can be, the envious cockeyed.
"whisper in the ballet of leaves" oh, please. That's the corn pooping. Still, I envy your fine, rolling poetic eye. [i think i'm being civil-this is drivel except for a few lines. And I apologize but I just gotta, gotta, gotta whisper my own ballet of leaves. ]


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