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Re: Formative Years

Posted by cockeyed on May 20, 2005, at 0:49:09

In reply to Formative Years, posted by Toph on May 14, 2005, at 8:51:41

Whew, I thought I had it bad. But I was loved so it must have been good. Bam! Strange how 'good' hurts when one's a kid. By the way "toph" Instead of Topher Grace I think of Toph[et] which I think was a hebrew or aramaic word for hell. That last stanza is hell. the stuff of nitemare. But no hugs here, just the thought that nothing is perfect; I suspect that's what makes that image so good. [Man, is that pretentious or what.] Still that's a memory I'm glad I don't have or know. I can still feel it. worse, see it. Cockeyed


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