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Re: Manic Indiscretions » Susan47

Posted by PM80 on April 12, 2005, at 13:42:06

In reply to Manic Indiscretions, posted by Susan47 on April 7, 2005, at 3:39:50

I got goose bumps reading this. You are right on the money. And you are right when you say that he failed you; he did. He was not deserving of your trust, this little boy playing doctor. Maybe I'm too harsh, but I do not think I am half as harsh on him as he was on you. Write until you can let him go far from your thoughts, until he is a merely memory of a different life and still-growing Susan that helped you become the person you were always meant to be.


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