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You Said You Would Still Be With Me

Posted by AdaGrace on April 11, 2005, at 10:26:48

When I was 80, fat and ugly with no hair.
You said you'd love me anyway.
You said you'd hold me when we no longer could have sex. You said you would just hold me anyway.

But that's 40 years away, and you didn't even last 6 months after you said that.

You killed me the day I found out about her.

You killed me.

I am no longer the strong woman you knew and whom I became proud to be.

You killed me.

I am dead now. Nothing is left and noone can ever replace you.

DEAD

Dead
Empty
Abandoned
Dead



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