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Drowning

Posted by Susan47 on March 22, 2005, at 14:27:55

In reply to Say? (Not poetry, but words only), posted by Susan47 on March 22, 2005, at 13:49:28

is this how it feels?
Before the head goes under
for the last time.
Tightness in the chest.
Breathing not allowed.

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