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I Lied, Please Forgive Me.

Posted by Susan47 on February 3, 2005, at 18:16:17

I said I didn't want to have an effect on you in any way at all.
Didn't I say that?
If I meant it why am I pounding
away at your walls,
pounding and pounding ineffectually
having a tantrum, both fists raised,
bruising their shiny blue outsides
splintering my elbows
against the glass of your mind.


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