Posted by Jai Narayan on January 25, 2005, at 8:55:16
In reply to where is God?, posted by smokeymadison on January 24, 2005, at 21:19:49
lovely poem.
beautifully done.
I agree with Malthus:“”Spills an endless flood
Of pure white feathers
Drifting silently to the ground"This is absolutely beautiful.
This would make such a stunning image in a painting.”The image of the feathers is striking and unexpected.
During my childhood I remember many a night pondering and pleading with god over similar issues.
The tone and feeling of abandonment is so familiar.
where you brought up catholic?
thanks for your poem.
Ja* Narayan
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