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Re: out of your mind

Posted by Angela2 on September 23, 2004, at 17:12:39

In reply to out of your mind, posted by Jai Narayan on September 22, 2004, at 21:51:36

Wow, I get a sense that the speaker is really in touch with what it means to be at peace. A cloud seems really peaceful, unless it's having a thunder storm;) The words you use make me feel like the speaker is or wants peace (stroke, traverse, soft surface, enveloping, caress). And there are definitely lots of references to nature. In health magazines, sometimes they do articles on yoga and there's always a picture of mountains, or a field. This reminds me a lot of that. Who is it you are talking to? ("as we traveled through the worlds
I could take you to another dimension") Jai, I am beginning to understand who you are through your writing. You seem quite holy and thoughtful! It was a joy to read this...

Angela

 

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