Posted by Jai Narayan on September 16, 2004, at 13:37:33
In reply to Re: poem ... Dragon Scales on Subway Rails » Angela2, posted by Atticus on September 16, 2004, at 11:06:42
Have you set any of your poems to music? or danced them out? That is a dream of mine. Set one of my poems to music.
You seem so close to doing that with the rhythms
Or rap it?
I have enjoyed your images, vibrant new language use, fresh approach to each poem.
I like the sprialing movement where words and images send me out and draw me in. The shinny, sharp, soft....Your poem is like handling a sharp piece of metal with gloves on....the edges draw blood only after the softness has lulled me into holding the sharp too long or too tightly. Hummm....
Jai
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