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Re: Soft Footfalls Approaching Across Virtual Sands

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 11, 2004, at 9:36:24

In reply to Soft Footfalls Approaching Across Virtual Sands, posted by Atticus on September 10, 2004, at 20:25:18

So now I am a participant.
You are so deep.

I lounge in your pools of murmuring.
I bath in your words.
Laying back easing down into your spirit.
You are gentling the beast in us all.
thank you for this lovely poem.
you have a symphony of emotions, words and mind.
You play my frayed nerve endings into a sweet song.
I hope I can do the same for you.


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