Posted by Atticus on September 6, 2004, at 21:29:43
In reply to food for thought Atticus....thanks (nm), posted by Jai Narayan on September 5, 2004, at 22:48:36
Hi Jai,
I just want to be clear that the kind of constructive evaluation I offered on Part 2 is what you're seeking. If I overstepped any lines in expressing my thoughts about potential ways to go with the piece, I apologize; I thought that's what you had asked of me, but maybe I misinterpreted your request. It's a very successful piece of prose writing. But as I said during our discussion of "Hungry Pavement," there are things I would do differently with that story, given another chance. That's always what I was taught and what I believe: writing is process. And besides, as far as editors go, I'm no Theodore Dreiser; I could always be wrong. Ta. :) Atticus
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