Posted by Jai Narayan on September 4, 2004, at 19:48:26
In reply to Re: part one » Jai Narayan, posted by Atticus on September 4, 2004, at 19:32:33
Thank you Atticus, your usual brilliant self.
Now I'm worried about the next part. I knew the start was good but .....but...but.
this where I get worried.
Thank you for your insight and reflection.
This is a story about my husband who has recently died. I guess I'd like to work on this story as....oh I don't know. But you know how it goes when you take a story and rewrite you can lose the tone and voice.
It's so hard to see in my own work....so easy in someone elses.
So, I may be timid to put up the next part.
Jai Narayan hiding behind 3 feet of rewrite copy.
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