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took my time reading this :-) wonderful

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 4, 2004, at 8:32:39

In reply to Time Warp Drops of Coffee-House Coolness, 1989, posted by Atticus on September 3, 2004, at 15:45:12

The flash of ripped blue jeans, the scent of pot, Jimi’s purple haze….the boldly two circling…then the break into innocence and vulnerability. A dance of entwining, 2 becoming one, leather to gauze, voodoo to saints. It’s an old dance; the music and steps keep changing with the times.
I too did such a dance. Mine has replayed for decades in dreams. I invented new steps to the monkey, the jerk, and the free flow of movement not restricted by ritual or rhythm.
Atticus your dance is a well told tale.
I am honored to have my tribute.
Keep on writing…keep on keeping on.
Jai Narayan


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