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Re: I hear the distant thunder » Jai Narayan

Posted by Atticus on August 31, 2004, at 8:51:42

In reply to I hear the distant thunder, posted by Jai Narayan on August 30, 2004, at 21:56:29

This poem, wonderfully written, really brings home to me the environment you live in, and how radically different it is from my own. Your relationship to the land and my relationship to the city are, interestingly, really reflected in the peaceful rhythms of this poem and the jangly, edgy tone that comes most naturally to me. Your heart beats to the thunder of nature, mine to the thunder of the urban landscape. :) Atticus the city chile


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