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I hear the distant thunder

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 30, 2004, at 21:56:29

I hear the distant thunder
it pounds through my body
like a pulse
I lay down on the moist earth of moss
my eyes closed
lightning plays a hot pink with crescents of blue violet
I wait and listen
insects hum
I am you
my beloved earth

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I hear the distant thunder Jai Narayan 8/30/04
Re: I hear the distant thunder » Jai Narayan Atticus 8/31/04
I love your pulse...what can I say? (nm) Jai Narayan 8/31/04
Re: I hear the distant thunder » Jai Narayan malthus 8/31/04

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