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Re: poem ... Brittle

Posted by B2chica on July 21, 2004, at 8:55:00

In reply to Re: poem ... Brittle, posted by sybils3facesofeve on July 20, 2004, at 9:43:58

I Second that sybils3. this part just hit me like a ton of bricks-it's like you saw me. i too feel this familiar sting.
Thank You Atticus.
B2c.

> "As I felt the familiar salty sting
> Of eyelashes painted with 3 a.m. tears"
>
> This is touching and profound....perfectly stated. Thank you.
>


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