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Re: poem ... Brittle

Posted by sybils3facesofeve on July 20, 2004, at 9:43:58

In reply to poem ... Brittle, posted by Atticus on July 19, 2004, at 11:51:13

"As I felt the familiar salty sting
Of eyelashes painted with 3 a.m. tears"

This is touching and profound....perfectly stated. Thank you.

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