seems good to me... » shar

Posted by IsoM on February 21, 2003, at 14:22:49

In reply to In need of punctuation, posted by shar on February 21, 2003, at 13:12:46

Maybe it could have -
"As you work, work for the working rather than for the fruits of the work. It becomes art and connection with the essence of being."
Might be a bit of a run-on sentence but I don't think so. I like the original better than breaking it in two. I'm a bit of a grammar freak too & it is punctuated correctly.

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In need of punctuation shar 2/21/03
Re: In need of punctuation » shar beardedlady 2/21/03
seems good to me... » shar IsoM 2/21/03
Re: seems good to me... » IsoM beardedlady 2/21/03
P.S. » IsoM beardedlady 2/21/03
ah--my new motivation! (nm) » shar rayww 2/21/03
Re: check this one out :-) » beardedlady IsoM 2/21/03
Re: In need of punctuation » beardedlady rayww 2/21/03
Hardy har har! You're right! beardedlady 2/21/03
Re: In need of punctuation noa 2/22/03

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