Posted by tina on July 11, 2000, at 20:56:14
In reply to Re: to my poetry fans...., posted by CarolAnn on July 11, 2000, at 9:53:05
I didn't think it was a downer. I thought it was great. You have a special gift-that you can see inside a soul and put the feelings on paper. I liked it very much. Keep up the good work.
Hugs to you and yours
Good luck with the "terrible two's" as Greg puts it.---Tina> Hi ya'll, this is the first chance I've had to get online for a couple days. The baby is very well and having a great time with her daddy, who is taking some 'at home' vacation time.
> Since you asked, here is another poem. Just a warning, though, it is a bit of a 'downer', so don't read it if you're having a bad time right now.
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> Weeping Willow
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> In darkness weeps the willow,
> he is calling out my name.
> I long to find our meadow,
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> In the past lie all my hopes,
> dead and buried all my dreams.
> I have wept too many tears,
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> In darkness weeps the willow,
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> Take me back again I cry,
> but my cries are all in vain.
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> See, I told you it was a downer! A thousand brownie points to the first person who figures out what the "willow" is a metaphor, for. Or, if you just want to know the answer, scroll down this post a bit. love, CarolAnn
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> The 'willow' is a metaphor, for:
> .....my childhood.....
poster:tina
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