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I'm a Fan... » CarolAnn

Posted by shar on June 2, 2000, at 2:27:49

In reply to amateur poet night (okay, morning)...., posted by CarolAnn on June 1, 2000, at 9:16:45

CA - Yes, both of your poems were wonderful. I like the second one especially because it has sort of a gritty reality to it, that life does feel like a struggle at times. And I really like it that you use the word suicide instead of some "nice" word that would allude to it.

It is suicide, it's a horrible feeling, and it's real. Thanks for being real. And -- the fact that you prefer work of living is a point well-taken; a good message for everyone (or at least me).

Well done!
S


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