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Posted by jai narayan on February 18, 2009, at 21:43:52
I have a pimple on my nose
this will be some hideous prose
okay- sure seems like a rhyme
maybe write some prose next time
what's a line with no rhyme?
wow, this is a bad poem
I still have a pimple on my nose
sprinkled tea tree on my toes
where's Ellen Kay when you need her
last time I was here seems a blur
so glad I can come baCKS
MUST HAVE LAID ON THE CAPS
NO USE I STILL HAVE A PIMPLE ON MY NOSE
please bring your silly meter to read this...I love a good silly moment, don't you?
Posted by Toph on February 19, 2009, at 10:48:46
In reply to a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse?, posted by jai narayan on February 18, 2009, at 21:43:52
this joint has changed
same walls, new faces
I'm still deranged
and luking these placeswhen I hear her name
loud cheers apply
this joint ain't the same
without our friend jai
Posted by Partlycloudy on February 19, 2009, at 12:26:18
In reply to Re: a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse? » jai narayan, posted by Toph on February 19, 2009, at 10:48:46
Posted by Toph on February 21, 2009, at 16:48:35
In reply to I'm happy to see both your posts here! (nm), posted by Partlycloudy on February 19, 2009, at 12:26:18
Posted by Partlycloudy on February 23, 2009, at 11:24:24
In reply to and it would be nice to see you again (nm) » Partlycloudy, posted by Toph on February 21, 2009, at 16:48:35
Posted by jai narayan on March 2, 2009, at 21:21:35
In reply to Re: a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse? » jai narayan, posted by Toph on February 19, 2009, at 10:48:46
> this joint has changed
> same walls, new faces
> I'm still deranged
> and luking these places
>
> when I hear her name
> loud cheers apply
> this joint ain't the same
> without our friend jaiyou sweetie, loved the poem.
Posted by jai narayan on March 2, 2009, at 21:23:19
In reply to I'm happy to see both your posts here! (nm), posted by Partlycloudy on February 19, 2009, at 12:26:18
I miss you too. This place is so busy with new people. PC- I have always admired your emotional bravery. xoxox Jai
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