Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 880994

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a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse?

Posted by jai narayan on February 18, 2009, at 21:43:52

I have a pimple on my nose
this will be some hideous prose
okay- sure seems like a rhyme
maybe write some prose next time
what's a line with no rhyme?
wow, this is a bad poem
I still have a pimple on my nose
sprinkled tea tree on my toes
where's Ellen Kay when you need her
last time I was here seems a blur
so glad I can come baCKS
MUST HAVE LAID ON THE CAPS
NO USE I STILL HAVE A PIMPLE ON MY NOSE


please bring your silly meter to read this...I love a good silly moment, don't you?


 

Re: a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse? » jai narayan

Posted by Toph on February 19, 2009, at 10:48:46

In reply to a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse?, posted by jai narayan on February 18, 2009, at 21:43:52

this joint has changed
same walls, new faces
I'm still deranged
and luking these places

when I hear her name
loud cheers apply
this joint ain't the same
without our friend jai

 

I'm happy to see both your posts here! (nm)

Posted by Partlycloudy on February 19, 2009, at 12:26:18

In reply to Re: a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse? » jai narayan, posted by Toph on February 19, 2009, at 10:48:46

 

and it would be nice to see you again (nm) » Partlycloudy

Posted by Toph on February 21, 2009, at 16:48:35

In reply to I'm happy to see both your posts here! (nm), posted by Partlycloudy on February 19, 2009, at 12:26:18

 

I'm torn :-( (nm) » Toph

Posted by Partlycloudy on February 23, 2009, at 11:24:24

In reply to and it would be nice to see you again (nm) » Partlycloudy, posted by Toph on February 21, 2009, at 16:48:35

 

Re: a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse?

Posted by jai narayan on March 2, 2009, at 21:21:35

In reply to Re: a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse? » jai narayan, posted by Toph on February 19, 2009, at 10:48:46

> this joint has changed
> same walls, new faces
> I'm still deranged
> and luking these places
>
> when I hear her name
> loud cheers apply
> this joint ain't the same
> without our friend jai

you sweetie, loved the poem.


 

Re: I'm happy to see both your posts here!

Posted by jai narayan on March 2, 2009, at 21:23:19

In reply to I'm happy to see both your posts here! (nm), posted by Partlycloudy on February 19, 2009, at 12:26:18

I miss you too. This place is so busy with new people. PC- I have always admired your emotional bravery. xoxox Jai


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