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Re: a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse?

Posted by jai narayan on March 2, 2009, at 21:21:35

In reply to Re: a reAlly bad Poem oR is It prOse? » jai narayan, posted by Toph on February 19, 2009, at 10:48:46

> this joint has changed
> same walls, new faces
> I'm still deranged
> and luking these places
>
> when I hear her name
> loud cheers apply
> this joint ain't the same
> without our friend jai

you sweetie, loved the poem.



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