Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 856508

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Poem entitled 'Lost'

Posted by leo33 on October 8, 2008, at 22:29:41

I want to post my latest poem, I am having a very rough time of it and have been a member here since 1999, so bear with me. I haven't posted in a long while but read the board quite often. I am hanging on by a thread right now. Positive or negative feedback is welcome.

The title of the poem is "Lost"

Lost in this world around me
Lost in the feelings inside me
Lost are the feelings in my soul
Lost without the currency to pay the toll

Lost like a ship in the fog
Lost like an abandoned city dog
Lost and walking alone
Lost like one without a home

Lost and filled with overwhelming fear
Lost and shedding a lonely tear
Lost and extremely confused
Lost and my ego is bruised

Lost in a sea of despair
Lost and in need of repair
Lost and looking for love
Lost and praying for help form above

Lost and looking for hope
Lost and at the end of my rope
Lost and my mind is unsound
Lost and I need to be found

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((((((LEO)))))

Posted by WaterSapphire on October 9, 2008, at 22:26:19

In reply to Poem entitled 'Lost', posted by leo33 on October 8, 2008, at 22:29:41

Hopefully Leo that one little thread will turn into a platform or a foundation upon which you can stand and feel a ray of light. The poem was beautiful...
Peace
chelle

really beautiful, leo :) (nm) » leo33

Posted by alesta on October 10, 2008, at 15:09:57

In reply to Poem entitled 'Lost', posted by leo33 on October 8, 2008, at 22:29:41

Re: really beautiful, leo :)

Posted by leo33 on October 15, 2008, at 0:11:45

In reply to really beautiful, leo :) (nm) » leo33, posted by alesta on October 10, 2008, at 15:09:57

Thanks for your comment, I know the poem is not upbeat but it happens to be the feelings I have had as of late.

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