Poem entitled 'Lost'

Posted by leo33 on October 8, 2008, at 22:29:41

I want to post my latest poem, I am having a very rough time of it and have been a member here since 1999, so bear with me. I haven't posted in a long while but read the board quite often. I am hanging on by a thread right now. Positive or negative feedback is welcome.
The title of the poem is "Lost"
Lost in this world around me
Lost in the feelings inside me
Lost are the feelings in my soul
Lost without the currency to pay the toll
Lost like a ship in the fog
Lost like an abandoned city dog
Lost and walking alone
Lost like one without a home
Lost and filled with overwhelming fear
Lost and shedding a lonely tear
Lost and extremely confused
Lost and my ego is bruised
Lost in a sea of despair
Lost and in need of repair
Lost and looking for love
Lost and praying for help form above
Lost and looking for hope
Lost and at the end of my rope
Lost and my mind is unsound
Lost and I need to be found
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Poem entitled 'Lost' leo33 10/8/08
((((((LEO))))) WaterSapphire 10/9/08
really beautiful, leo :) (nm) » leo33 alesta 10/10/08
Re: really beautiful, leo :) leo33 10/15/08

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