Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 819046

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Jane - snigger or trigger

Posted by ronaldo on March 20, 2008, at 17:32:36

I was surprised [xxx]

A mere slip of a woman but all that oozing charm

That flowed like a babbling brook from her laughing lips

Was silent, she wasn't laughing now...

She sighed, a long low guttural groan

Not the moan you would normally hear from Jane

[xxx]

Her eyes were still focussed but they were mute

Again and again until it seemed senseless for senseless was she

I tried for a pulse but no there was none

I left the office for my work was done.

 

Please be sensitive » ronaldo

Posted by Deputy Dinah on March 22, 2008, at 10:35:07

In reply to Jane - snigger or trigger, posted by ronaldo on March 20, 2008, at 17:32:36

> I was surprised [xxx]

Although this is the writing board, your freedom of speech is limited here.

Please don't use language that could offend others, or post about death or injury in this way.

Dr. Bob has xxx'd out the portions of this post that he believed were not appropriate on Babble.

If you or others have questions about this or about posting policies in general, or are interested in alternative ways of expressing yourself, please see the FAQ:

http://www.dr-bob.org/babble/faq.html#civil

Follow-ups regarding these issues should be redirected to Psycho-Babble Administration. They, as well as replies to the above posts, should of course themselves be civil.

Dinah, acting as deputy to Dr. Bob

 

Re: Please be sensitive

Posted by ronaldo on March 25, 2008, at 6:00:22

In reply to Please be sensitive » ronaldo, posted by Deputy Dinah on March 22, 2008, at 9:35:07

> > I was surprised [xxx]
>
> Although this is the writing board, your freedom of speech is limited here.
>
> Please don't use language that could offend others, or post about death or injury in this way.
>
> Dr. Bob has xxx'd out the portions of this post that he believed were not appropriate on Babble.
>
> If you or others have questions about this or about posting policies in general, or are interested in alternative ways of expressing yourself, please see the FAQ:
>
> http://www.dr-bob.org/babble/faq.html#civil
>
> Follow-ups regarding these issues should be redirected to Psycho-Babble Administration. They, as well as replies to the above posts, should of course themselves be civil.
>
> Dinah, acting as deputy to Dr. Bob
>

Thank you Dinah, you and Dr Bob are quite right. I allowed my feelings, a manic high, to run away with me. I am glad Dr Bob struck out the more offensive parts and I apologize to anyone and everyone who was offended. Olanzapine do your work.


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