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Jane - snigger or trigger

Posted by ronaldo on March 20, 2008, at 17:32:36

I was surprised [xxx]

A mere slip of a woman but all that oozing charm

That flowed like a babbling brook from her laughing lips

Was silent, she wasn't laughing now...

She sighed, a long low guttural groan

Not the moan you would normally hear from Jane

[xxx]

Her eyes were still focussed but they were mute

Again and again until it seemed senseless for senseless was she

I tried for a pulse but no there was none

I left the office for my work was done.


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