Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 776201

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saw nothing new

Posted by karen_kay on August 14, 2007, at 11:38:15

saw nothing new
thought i'd write
oh but a few
just something trite

some silly lines
that sound the same
to keep me going
and keep me sane

you don't have to read
please don't respond
i'd rather be hitting
a huge, green bong

i'm feeling u~p~p~i~t~y
perhaps it's from stress
maybe i need
a brand new dress

to go out and try
and dance, it's called?
i'd be beaten
i'd probably be mauled

now there's newness
upon this blank page
laugh if you wanna
i'll not go to rage

take care poets and writers :)
kk

Re: saw nothing new

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 14, 2007, at 22:33:21

In reply to saw nothing new, posted by karen_kay on August 14, 2007, at 11:38:15

> saw nothing new
> thought i'd write
> oh but a few
> just something trite
>
> some silly lines
> that sound the same
> to keep me going
> and keep me sane
>
> you don't have to read
> please don't respond
> i'd rather be hitting
> a huge, green bong
>
> I'm feeling u~p~p~i~t~y
> perhaps it's from stress
> maybe i need
> a brand new dress
>
> to go out and try
> and dance, it's called?
> i'd be beaten
> i'd probably be mauled
>
> now there's newness
> upon this blank page
> laugh if you wanna
> i'll not go to rage
>
> take care poets and writers :)
> kk
>
>

you are quite a poet! I smile and enjoy your delightfully original lines of rhyme and silk. I would be honored by your response. you are an artist who entices the likes of me.

xoxxo
Jai

thank you sweetie » Jai Narayan

Posted by karen_kay on August 15, 2007, at 10:39:22

In reply to Re: saw nothing new, posted by Jai Narayan on August 14, 2007, at 22:33:21

i enjoy yours as well. just not certain what to say back.

'wonderful' seems boring.
'great' seems not enough.
so i just don't say anythign at all, you know?

i do enjoy reading your thoughts jai.

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