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Re: saw nothing new

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 14, 2007, at 22:33:21

In reply to saw nothing new, posted by karen_kay on August 14, 2007, at 11:38:15

> saw nothing new
> thought i'd write
> oh but a few
> just something trite
>
> some silly lines
> that sound the same
> to keep me going
> and keep me sane
>
> you don't have to read
> please don't respond
> i'd rather be hitting
> a huge, green bong
>
> I'm feeling u~p~p~i~t~y
> perhaps it's from stress
> maybe i need
> a brand new dress
>
> to go out and try
> and dance, it's called?
> i'd be beaten
> i'd probably be mauled
>
> now there's newness
> upon this blank page
> laugh if you wanna
> i'll not go to rage
>
> take care poets and writers :)
> kk
>
>

you are quite a poet! I smile and enjoy your delightfully original lines of rhyme and silk. I would be honored by your response. you are an artist who entices the likes of me.

xoxxo
Jai


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