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My first and only poem

Posted by SoulSide on December 8, 2006, at 18:50:16

~Dalhousie Street~

You and I stayed out to watch the light for awhile.

A walk to the market as the sun slowly died.

You didn't sound like me anymore,

when you explained flight.

I had nothing to doubt,

and less to hide.

So I left

defined.

 

simply put---great. sorry to read this is a oner (nm) » SoulSide

Posted by zenhussy on December 9, 2006, at 16:49:59

In reply to My first and only poem, posted by SoulSide on December 8, 2006, at 18:50:16

 

why must it be the only one, Soulside? » SoulSide

Posted by alesta on December 10, 2006, at 14:00:05

In reply to My first and only poem, posted by SoulSide on December 8, 2006, at 18:50:16

> ~Dalhousie Street~
>
> You and I stayed out to watch the light for awhile.
>
> A walk to the market as the sun slowly died.
>
> You didn't sound like me anymore,
>
> when you explained flight.
>
> I had nothing to doubt,
>
> and less to hide.
>
> So I left
>
> defined.


I like this, too, Soulside (like your name!)..sorry, not feeling very talkative..so i'll leave it at that for now.

Be well ahite,
Alesta :)

 

Re: why must it be the only one, Soulside?

Posted by SoulSide on December 11, 2006, at 18:37:52

In reply to why must it be the only one, Soulside? » SoulSide, posted by alesta on December 10, 2006, at 14:00:05

I am just getting started. I think I worded that post incorrectly. It should have read my first poem (period).

 

my first poem (period)--much better sub. line = ) (nm) » SoulSide

Posted by zenhussy on December 11, 2006, at 18:52:45

In reply to Re: why must it be the only one, Soulside?, posted by SoulSide on December 11, 2006, at 18:37:52


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