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My first and only poem

Posted by SoulSide on December 8, 2006, at 18:50:16

~Dalhousie Street~
You and I stayed out to watch the light for awhile.
A walk to the market as the sun slowly died.
You didn't sound like me anymore,
when you explained flight.
I had nothing to doubt,
and less to hide.
So I left
defined.

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My first and only poem SoulSide 12/8/06
simply put---great. sorry to read this is a oner (nm) » SoulSide zenhussy 12/9/06
why must it be the only one, Soulside? » SoulSide alesta 12/10/06
Re: why must it be the only one, Soulside? SoulSide 12/11/06
my first poem (period)--much better sub. line = ) (nm) » SoulSide zenhussy 12/11/06

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