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Posted by SoulSide on December 8, 2006, at 18:50:16
~Dalhousie Street~
You and I stayed out to watch the light for awhile.
A walk to the market as the sun slowly died.
You didn't sound like me anymore,
when you explained flight.
I had nothing to doubt,
and less to hide.
So I left
defined.
Posted by zenhussy on December 9, 2006, at 16:49:59
In reply to My first and only poem, posted by SoulSide on December 8, 2006, at 18:50:16
Posted by alesta on December 10, 2006, at 14:00:05
In reply to My first and only poem, posted by SoulSide on December 8, 2006, at 18:50:16
> ~Dalhousie Street~
>
> You and I stayed out to watch the light for awhile.
>
> A walk to the market as the sun slowly died.
>
> You didn't sound like me anymore,
>
> when you explained flight.
>
> I had nothing to doubt,
>
> and less to hide.
>
> So I left
>
> defined.
I like this, too, Soulside (like your name!)..sorry, not feeling very talkative..so i'll leave it at that for now.Be well ahite,
Alesta :)
Posted by SoulSide on December 11, 2006, at 18:37:52
In reply to why must it be the only one, Soulside? » SoulSide, posted by alesta on December 10, 2006, at 14:00:05
I am just getting started. I think I worded that post incorrectly. It should have read my first poem (period).
Posted by zenhussy on December 11, 2006, at 18:52:45
In reply to Re: why must it be the only one, Soulside?, posted by SoulSide on December 11, 2006, at 18:37:52
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