Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 687938

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Halloween Hai-boo chain

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 21, 2006, at 16:50:22

please use my last line for the next poster's first line of this Haiku chain...then the next person uses the preceding person's last line and we build upon one another's words and we may have some fun: Haiku is done by syllables: first line is 5 second it 7 last line is 5
I'll start:

sleek animals slink
the gray sidewalk looking for
stray candy corn bits

Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain

Posted by Toph on September 21, 2006, at 18:09:07

In reply to Halloween Hai-boo chain, posted by Jai Narayan on September 21, 2006, at 16:50:22

stray candy corn bits
stuck on my teeth protrude down
sweet Count Dracula

Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain

Posted by Jai Narayan on September 22, 2006, at 7:32:48

In reply to Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain, posted by Toph on September 21, 2006, at 18:09:07

> stray candy corn bits
> stuck on my teeth protrude down
> sweet Count Dracula

aching belly swell
empty bag with spent candy
wrappers on my face

Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain

Posted by sunnydays on September 29, 2006, at 19:47:29

In reply to Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain, posted by Jai Narayan on September 22, 2006, at 7:32:48

I'm new to this, but it sounded fun, so I thought I'd give it a try.

> > stray candy corn bits
> > stuck on my teeth protrude down
> > sweet Count Dracula
>
> aching belly swell
> empty bag with spent candy
> wrappers on my face
>

wrappers on my face
the stickiness in my hair
legs ache from walking

Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain

Posted by Jai Narayan on October 2, 2006, at 22:41:17

In reply to Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain, posted by sunnydays on September 29, 2006, at 19:47:29

> I'm new to this, but it sounded fun, so I thought I'd give it a try.
>
> > > stray candy corn bits
> > > stuck on my teeth protrude down
> > > sweet Count Dracula
> >
> > aching belly swell
> > empty bag with spent candy
> > wrappers on my face
> >
>
> wrappers on my face
> the stickiness in my hair
> legs ache from walking
>
legs ache from walking
past graves and raves- I walk on
munching candy corn

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