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Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain

Posted by Jai Narayan on October 2, 2006, at 22:41:17

In reply to Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain, posted by sunnydays on September 29, 2006, at 19:47:29

> I'm new to this, but it sounded fun, so I thought I'd give it a try.
>
> > > stray candy corn bits
> > > stuck on my teeth protrude down
> > > sweet Count Dracula
> >
> > aching belly swell
> > empty bag with spent candy
> > wrappers on my face
> >
>
> wrappers on my face
> the stickiness in my hair
> legs ache from walking
>
legs ache from walking
past graves and raves- I walk on
munching candy corn


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