Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 666887

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S.O.S.

Posted by Poet on July 13, 2006, at 21:26:15

Drowning in failure
Mistakes anchored to the soul
Life and preservers float away
Mermaids’requiems lure
Ghost ships beckon
Demons hover
Angels circle
Rescue or devour?

Life preserver coming your way » Poet

Posted by gardenergirl on July 13, 2006, at 21:39:09

In reply to S.O.S., posted by Poet on July 13, 2006, at 21:26:15

Just grab hold. I'll pull you to safety as best I can and give you a heartfelt air hug.

Love,
gg

Re: S.O.S.

Posted by susan47 on July 14, 2006, at 11:30:10

In reply to S.O.S., posted by Poet on July 13, 2006, at 21:26:15

> Drowning in failure
> Mistakes anchored to the soul
> Life and preservers float away
> Mermaids’requiems lure
> Ghost ships beckon
> Demons hover
> Angels circle
> Rescue or devour?
>

Both. Both. a little at a time, sometimes more rescue, sometimes you're a bit chewy, and they spit you out ... sometimes your preserver is where you least expected it sometimes you'd rather drown.

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